....Okey... great tips to get the driving licence...your classmate will thank you on that... As to EL PERDÓN... do you have soemthing to do with it?... Do you belong to the band?... let us know... Regarding the haiku if you read it out loud you´ll notice- as you have a musical ear- that the rhythm fails in the last verse... can you realize it?... Anyway I think that the metaphor may be tighter, more secluded... it´s too obvious that it is SUCCESS...can you make it more hermetic???
Gracias Ana Carmen, como verás corregí el post. En cuanto al post de la Semana Santa, pertenezco a una banda, y anualmente tocamos detrás de la Virgen María Santísima del Rocío y Lágrimas, el Miércoles Santo. Si estás en Córdoba espero verte ese día. Un saludo =)
....Okey... great tips to get the driving licence...your classmate will thank you on that... As to EL PERDÓN... do you have soemthing to do with it?... Do you belong to the band?... let us know... Regarding the haiku if you read it out loud you´ll notice- as you have a musical ear- that the rhythm fails in the last verse... can you realize it?... Anyway I think that the metaphor may be tighter, more secluded... it´s too obvious that it is SUCCESS...can you make it more hermetic???
ResponderEliminarGracias Ana Carmen, como verás corregí el post. En cuanto al post de la Semana Santa, pertenezco a una banda, y anualmente tocamos detrás de la Virgen María Santísima del Rocío y Lágrimas, el Miércoles Santo. Si estás en Córdoba espero verte ese día. Un saludo =)
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